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Post by Claire on Feb 2, 2008 14:27:49 GMT -5
D'Hawfrin
D'Hawfrin let her slik smooth body bounce in the rain.She looked around, a small flash of lighting startled her but also gave light.Her small red scar across her left eye had been shone.A fight she got into with her brother.She walked through the ruins, her paws leaving paw prints as she walked.She held her head low to the ground as she walked.She was truly grateful for the muscle she had been granted for becoming a soul seeker.Her unique rich grey coat that layers her cold skin is warm and fluffy.Her eyes clenched anger and hatred.She does flirt but brings the male's heart into a boiling pit of hot lava when she tells him sternly that she does not love him.She gives his a good slash across the face just like that and leaves.Though D'hawfrin has all the qualities you could need; strength, and beauty; she is not invincable.Though almost, her cuts heal instantly unless they are big and ''Un-fixable''.She walks the earth and strikes fear in wolf's eyes because she is great and powerful.Very few wolves dared to face her power and strength, even her words seem to strike speechlesness into her victims.Which is why she became a soul seeker.Love never found her hot heart.Only when he heart freezes shall she find a love.Perhaps...
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Post by Darkness on Feb 2, 2008 15:34:33 GMT -5
A little more detail, please.
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Post by Claire on Feb 3, 2008 11:14:03 GMT -5
Like what?I've got personality appearance history, and an rp example all in one!You know her name, her gender the only thing missing is her age which is 13 years old.
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Post by Darkness on Feb 3, 2008 11:16:22 GMT -5
Where's the personality? It's just really short for DarkStar standards.
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Post by Claire on Feb 3, 2008 11:19:09 GMT -5
That was her personality.
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Post by Darkness on Feb 3, 2008 11:26:03 GMT -5
I need some more detail in personality. ^^ Here's some questions you might wanna answer whilst writing a personality;;
1) Is she arrogant/vain/full of herself in any way? 2) Does she flirt? 3) Is she an intelligent wolf? 4) Why does she hate love? 5) Describe her darkness in fuller detail. 6) Why the anger? 7) How does she react in certain situations? 8) Where did all this bloodthirstiness start? 9) What makes her sad? 10) What makes her glad?
Even try to add a few quirks if you can, like, favourite colour, favourite direction to sleep in, her morning routine, etc.
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Post by Claire on Feb 3, 2008 16:24:30 GMT -5
There, I modfied it.
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Post by Darkness on Feb 3, 2008 17:33:17 GMT -5
//Accepted.
Yay, four Soul Seekers!!!
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Post by Claire on Feb 9, 2008 9:42:08 GMT -5
How do you like the name, its a vengeunce demon's name from Buffy, XD just hes a boy. And my wolfie D'hawfrin=Girl...
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