Saphi Star

[saphistar]

--- General ---


Name: Star

Age:10-11 months
Gender: Female

Species: Wolf


--- Appearance ---


Height: About two feet
Weight: Roughly seventy to eighty pounds

Body type: Slender

Fur Color: White and Grey
Eye Color: Oceanic blue

Other Appearance Details: Star that has a circle around it on her front part neck.

Alignment: Neutral

--- Personality --- Star is a nice, kind and loving wolf, but she can get aggresive if she wanted to. So if somone picked a fight she could fight them. Star would never pick a fight with anyone unless they were hurting somone else. She is also very helpful.


--- Past ---Star was a good wolf but she was always sad inside, she never seen her familyeven though they were good, and she never really made friends, and she got picked on but she never stands up. They were a good family but she never saw alot of her dad. One dark night Star and her mom went looking for her dad, but that night wasn't so good. The Ground started to shake things started to fall. Star and her mom got seperated that night and she never did see her dad. Star still has dreams about that horrible night. Now she is here a half a month later, still wounder if she will ever see them again.

--- Present ---Out there alone noone to be her friend no one to say its ok kay i am right here, nothing will happen. Alone in the big world.


Current Pack: Loner
Current Rank: N/A

Past Pack(s): None

Crush: None
Love: None
Mate: None
Offspring: None


Images: Pup witch is NOW!

[Darkness]

First, it says she's a panther in her past. Second, where's the detailed appearance? Third, personality needs some work. Fourth, she ten to eleven months is practically an adult; she would look more like the second picture. Fifth, how can a brown-grey cub turn white?

[[x]L.una[x]]

It's good, but it needs a little... OMPH.... I guess how I would put it. Just please, try again.